Rought Cut - David Leighton & Bradley Hope

This is our rough cut of our video to Misery by Maroon Five, there is about forty seconds of footage at the end still left to edit. It was shown in front of the class we have received the following comments; any negative comments will be acted on and the video will be changed accordingly for the final cut. The positive comments have also been typed down:

Positive comments-
- Interesting use of effects.
- Impressive stop motion.
- Good editing
- Overall good video, keep at it.


Negative comments -
- The lip syncing is out, a little tweaking should fix this.
- Perhaps use different angles for the lip synced parts, instead of just straight ahead.
- Some of the text intersections either linger for too long or seem unnecessary.

What will we do about it?
- We will remove the second text intersection (-No Trust-) as that has been deemed most unnecessary. Furthermore we will speed up the third text intersection (-Psychopath-).
- For the 'more camera angles for lip syncing' we will simply take a few seconds extra footage from different angles and add it into the video.
- The reason the lip syncing is out is because it was recently edited just before we uploaded it and we did not realise it was slightly out, a tiny bit of tweaking should fix this rather easily.

More Stop Motion Rough Cuts, Misery Maroon Five - David Leighton & Bradley Hope

Another short of stop motion to be combined with our music video, no music as it is just a rough cut.

David

Stop Motion - Rough Cuts, David Leighton & Bradley Hope

This is one of our stop motion pieces of filming we shall be using along with music and other scenes in our video. There is no music, this will be added later as it is a rough cut.

David